I hear the shots of the gun, the ripping of tusks and blood dripping. I saw in horror as my family died. I felt anger, sadness and the lust for revenge. I wonder will there ever be peace.
Kia ora. I am Sam from St Mary’s School. I really liked that you wrote it as if the elephant was talking. Your thoughts made me feel sorry for elephants. Maybe you could use a simile next time. Please visit my blog here
Kia ora. I am Sam from St Mary’s School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked that you wrote it as if the elephant was talking.
Your thoughts made me feel sorry for elephants.
Maybe you could use a simile next time.
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Sam
Thank you for the tip I will make sure to do it next time I do a poem.
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