To Miss Cook
Te Kahu Pompallier Catholic School
Dear Miss Cook
My name is Ebes Chettiyattu Arun.
I was born in Perumbavoor,India raised in Rotorua, Auckland and
Kaitaia. I am a pure Indian my Father is Advocate Arun Peter and my Mother
is Honey Peter and I have a sister who is 4 I have a uncle and an aunt and I
have a cousin sister who is turning 1
I was born in Perumbavoor,India raised in Rotorua, Auckland and
Kaitaia. I am a pure Indian my Father is Advocate Arun Peter and my Mother
is Honey Peter and I have a sister who is 4 I have a uncle and an aunt and I
have a cousin sister who is turning 1
I started schooling in Beach Kids Kindergarten Rotorua, then year four at New Windsor
School Auckland and year 3 at Pompallier Catholic School Kaitaia where I am now.
School Auckland and year 3 at Pompallier Catholic School Kaitaia where I am now.
My hobbies are reading, martial arts and computer gaming.My
favourite colour is red.My favourite subject is literacy.My favourite game is
prodigy. Something I am excited for is our family trip to Rotorua the reason I
am excited is because I can visit my childhood home.
favourite colour is red.My favourite subject is literacy.My favourite game is
prodigy. Something I am excited for is our family trip to Rotorua the reason I
am excited is because I can visit my childhood home.
Yours Sincerely, Ebes Arun
Ebes Arun
Good work Ebes, thank you for sharing a bit more about yourself with me.
ReplyDeleteYou have made a great start with using the correct structure when writing a letter. Your next step is to add a bit more detail to your writing by explaining each of your main points.
Keep it up :)